In addition to not showing a great deal of enthusiasm, it doesn’t seem like you approach this task with much effort. Avoid explaining how you choose to structure your analysis based on ‘it is easier… I guess’.
You use some literary terminology effectively, but overall do not analyze this text as a piece of literature. Try to avoid sweeping generalizations about themes without grounding them in specific and detailed analysis of text. You need to demonstrate an awareness of how literary features construct meaning with an awareness of Munro’s choices and the effect on the reader. Much of your commentary is just explaining what is on the page.
In addition to not showing a great deal of enthusiasm, it doesn’t seem like you approach this task with much effort. Avoid explaining how you choose to structure your analysis based on ‘it is easier… I guess’.
ReplyDeleteYou use some literary terminology effectively, but overall do not analyze this text as a piece of literature. Try to avoid sweeping generalizations about themes without grounding them in specific and detailed analysis of text. You need to demonstrate an awareness of how literary features construct meaning with an awareness of Munro’s choices and the effect on the reader. Much of your commentary is just explaining what is on the page.